[i=s] 本帖最后由 eeeeeeeeeepeop 于 2015-7-31 23:55 编辑 A memorable scene I can still recall it clearly is their first meet. At that moment, Kaoru lifts the white cloth on a desk, a boy appears and grabs his hand softly, saying——" Are you the Angel gonna save me from here?“ The light glittering on their faces, I could never left it behind my mind. ——————看完之后，在我脑海中完美再现了 ...........(ΦωΦ)... 行文好流畅啊，好流畅啊，好流畅一口气看完好过瘾，好过瘾！(〃ω〃) 虽然有语法错误，但不伤大雅，不伤大雅整体感觉很好，很好